Patrick Rapa Criticizes a Story of Mine

Patrick Rapa has a blog called "I Read A Short Story Today". A long time ago, he read my story "She Was Everything to Him" in Fiction Magazine and didn't like it. My favorite part of this critique is when he says, "I wish everybody who sets his/her fiction in New York City would move. It can be done well, but. It’s boring. It’s snobby. It adds nothing. Hell’s Kitchen. Park Slope. Been to those places. "